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I stand in halls of memory,
A place of my own making,
Of faded pictures and crawling drafts,
The haunting of my troubled soul,
My palace, My prison.
A place of my own making,
Of faded pictures and crawling drafts,
The haunting of my troubled soul,
My palace, My prison.
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Far more imagery than you usually use, though they seem a little truant.
The rhythm works very well with the half-rhyme, the only line that I think need work is the fourth. I think it sounds better as:
"The haunting haunt of my upset soul,"
The rhythm works very well with the half-rhyme, the only line that I think need work is the fourth. I think it sounds better as:
"The haunting haunt of my upset soul,"